Thursday, April 1, 2010

Gave him the points lead

I FOUND A SENTENCE that ended this way: "... moved him into first place in the points race." I'd change that to "... gave him the points lead."

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1 comment:

  1. Sometimes it's just one word that makes all the difference.

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