Is there a difference between "exactly what went wrong" and "what went wrong?" Probably not.
I'm always thinking about how to pare a story down. But don't worry; I don't want to get rid of the good stuff, just the unnecessary.
I GOT THIS COMMENT on an edited sentence from yesterday's blog:
Heather Awad said...
Sometimes it's just one word that makes all the difference.
Truer words were never spoken. Sometimes one word makes all the difference.
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