Sunday, January 29, 2012

A smoother read

Found online: It was Williams, after the disastrous three-year tenure of Bob Wade, who picked up the pieces of a shattered program and made Maryland matter again. 

There's an easier way to do this for the reader.

After the disastrous three-year tenure of Bob Wade, it was Williams who picked up the pieces of a shattered program and made Maryland matter again.


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