Monday, January 2, 2012

They did it wrong again

Needs editing: You see this sort of thing all the time.

If he is healthy, Irsay has promised to bring back Manning regardless of the $28 million bonus he is owed in March.

It doesn't matter whether Irsay is healthy. Let's change it this way:

If Manning is healthy, Irsay has promised to bring him back regardless of the $28 million bonus he is owed in March.

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