"Unlike a brain surgeon, the beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time."
— Robert Cormier
Tuesday, January 3, 2012
Needs editing:The Tigers cut their deficit in half at 54-52 on a field goal by Justin
Hamilton, who had a career-high 21 points, with 51 seconds remaining. The problem is the clause with 21 points. Let's rearrange the sentence. Justin
Hamilton, who scored a career-high 21 points, hit a field goal with 51 seconds left to cut the Tigers' deficit in half at 54-52.