Monday, May 14, 2012

Attribution problems

Found online: "I heard the thud, and I was like, 'It didn't hit me, but I'm glad it hit somebody,'" Lovejoy, a fifth-year senior, said, then cracked a smile. "I'm actually kind of glad it didn't hit me."

Normally, I wouldn't use two attributions in one paragraph, but I might here:

"I heard the thud, and I was like, 'It didn't hit me, but I'm glad it hit somebody,'" said Lovejoy, a fifth-year senior. "I'm actually kind of glad it didn't hit me," he added with a smile.


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