Saturday, September 15, 2012

For several years,...

Found online: He’d been living in Seattle, where he met his co-founders, for several years.

No, sorry. The time element doesn't work this way. Let's change it:


For several years, he’d been living in Seattle, where he met his co-founders.

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ENTRIES FROM THE DOG BLOG

BLOG ENTRIES FROM THE AUTO RACING JOURNAL
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)

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