Thursday, December 20, 2012

This paragraph needs editing

Found online: Of course, those four receivers would compliment Brian Hartline, who I lauded in a follow up article. At least I got that right.

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Of course, those four receivers would complement Brian Hartline, whom I lauded in a follow-up article. At least I got that right.

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