Thursday, December 6, 2012

Their other defeats

Found online: With the loss, UT falls to 4-3 on the year, their other defeats at the hands of Oklahoma State and Georgetown.

This is common overwriting. I'd change it this way:

UT (4-3) also has lost to Oklahoma State and Georgetown this year.

By the way, you wouldn't say UT suffered their; UT suffered its other losses...

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