Word placement

FOUND ONLINE: A veteran Salem car dealer facing fallout from recent criminal convictions has sold his dealership.

Let's try again with one word added:

A veteran Salem car dealer has sold his dealership after facing fallout from recent criminal convictions.

"Has sold his dealership" is almost lost the first time around.

LINKS: On my web site, I have links to some of my stories online.

WRITERS' GUIDELINES: If you want to write for magazines (or book publishers), check out the writers' guidelines on my Freelance Writers and Editors group on Yahoo!

CHECK IT OUT: You might look at Funds for Writers, which specializes in grants for writers.

CONTACT: You can reach me at tgilli52@gmail.com or nc3022@yahoo.com. Also, my Twitter handle is EDITORatWORK.

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• An editor's views on powerful writing

• Advice for be and would-be novelists

• Links to TG's stories online

• Favorite quotes

• What I do when I'm editing

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