Thursday, September 8, 2016

He's a player

FOUND ONLINE: He’s a player everyone will be tracking early on.

Yes, he's a player. And there's a simpler way to say this.

Everyone will be tracking him early on.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Oregon sacked Benkert six times, and he threw two interceptions.

I disagree here. He didn't throw two interceptions; he was intercepted twice. Big difference.

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