Thursday, October 27, 2016

Has been lined

FOUND ONLINE: Hillary Clintonwho blasted Donald Trump’s tax plan as “tax cuts for millionaires”has now been lined to a controversial tax-free investment account.

I assume the writer meant linked, not lined. Also, I'd change those dashes to commas. Small changes, but it's smoother.

Hillary Clinton, who blasted Donald Trump’s tax plan as “tax cuts for millionaires”, has now been linked to a controversial tax-free investment account.

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