Thursday, March 2, 2017

Little of seven

FOUND ONLINE: A dog named Daisy experienced the proudest moment of her life when she gave birth to a little of seven adorable puppies.

I hope the writer meant litter, not little.

A dog named Daisy experienced the proudest moment of her life when she gave birth to a litter of seven adorable puppies.


ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Shemar Moore's character Derek Morgan exited Criminal Minds by handing in his badge to spend more time with his newborn soon.

I hope they meant newborn son, not newborn soon. I'd also put commas before and after Derek Morgan.


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