EDITOR@WORK: reigns vs. reins

FOUND ONLINE: She seems very likely to serve personally in a very senior staff role in a Clinton administration, so she’s a natural pick for an important transition job.

I hate very, and there two too many uses of very here. If you take out both words, the meaning is pretty much the same. A senior staff role and a very senior staff role: What's the difference? And do you need the word personally?

She seems likely to serve in a senior staff role in a Clinton administration, so she’s a natural pick for an important transition job.

MORE VERY: Arthritis is very common; however there may be more serious causes for difficulty and lack of movement.

Again, very isn't necessary. Arthritis is common works just fine.

ANOTHER PROBLEM: As chief executive of the Trump campaign, Bannon, it's fair to assume, will have free reign to shape the message that the Trump campaign projects.

I've said this before (and I'm sure I'll say it again); it's free rein, not free reign. It's like a horse's reins.

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FOUND ONLINE: The Miami Dolphins turned the reigns over to new head coach Adam Gase...

Yes, that would be reins, like the reins of a horse (or the reins of a football franchise).

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Before ever playing a down of professional football, Dion Jordan was already drawing comparisons to Dolphins' great, Jason Taylor.

You don't need an apostrophe on Dolphins or a comma after great, and you don't need already.

Before ever playing a down of professional football, Dion Jordan was drawing comparisons to Dolphins great Jason Taylor.

MORE FROM THE INTERNET: Newcomer Cleyon Laing enters the mix; however, his transition from the CFL to NFL won't be seamless and (he) is viewed as more a project at this moment in time.

Wordy; now replaces at this moment in time nicely. Or you can put a period after project. And I added the (he). I think it's needed.

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