FOUND ONLINE: The Miami Dolphins turned the reigns over to new head coach Adam Gase...
Yes, that would be reins, like the reins of a horse (or the reins of a football franchise).
ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Before ever playing a down of professional football, Dion Jordan was already drawing comparisons to Dolphins' great, Jason Taylor.
You don't need an apostrophe on Dolphins or a comma after great, and you don't need already.
Before ever playing a down of professional football, Dion Jordan was drawing comparisons to Dolphins great Jason Taylor.
MORE FROM THE INTERNET: Newcomer Cleyon Laing enters the mix; however, his transition from the CFL to NFL won't be seamless and (he) is viewed as more a project at this moment in time.
Wordy; now replaces at this moment in time nicely. Or you can put a period after project. And I added the (he). I think it's needed.
Yes, that would be reins, like the reins of a horse (or the reins of a football franchise).
ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Before ever playing a down of professional football, Dion Jordan was already drawing comparisons to Dolphins' great, Jason Taylor.
You don't need an apostrophe on Dolphins or a comma after great, and you don't need already.
Before ever playing a down of professional football, Dion Jordan was drawing comparisons to Dolphins great Jason Taylor.
MORE FROM THE INTERNET: Newcomer Cleyon Laing enters the mix; however, his transition from the CFL to NFL won't be seamless and (he) is viewed as more a project at this moment in time.
Wordy; now replaces at this moment in time nicely. Or you can put a period after project. And I added the (he). I think it's needed.
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