Found today in an online story: “We’re very optimistic and it’s a matter of when, not if,” Joel Segal, Vick’s agent, said. It's NY Times style to split the name and said, but it reads better as “We’re very optimistic and it’s a matter of when, not if,” said Joel Segal, Vick’s agent.
Here's another one: Dee was hired by owner Stephen Ross to upgrade the business side of the organization. That reads better as Owner Stephen Ross hired Dee...
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Life needs editing: Speaking of needs editing, I found a web site called Life Needs Editing. There's no information, only an email address and a phone number. I guess the guy (or gal) is an editor.