Wednesday, November 2, 2011

50 fancy words and more

Times blog: You might check out the N.Y. Times blog entry "50 fancy words." If you're into writing, editing or grammar, it'd be worth your time.

Needs editing: Standing in their path: the Maryland Terrapins—a team that has fallen to 2-6 and look ripe for the picking.

It would read better this way: Standing in their path: the Maryland Terrapins, who have fallen to 2-6 and look ripe for the picking.


More later.

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