Needs editing: Boeing will take over a trio of empty buildings... How about just three empty buildings?
More editing: Virginia's 13-play 94-yard drive was the longest
drive (yardage) since going 97-yards for a TD against William & Mary in
week one. It's just 97 yards; you don't need a hyphen unless you say that it's a 97-yard drive. Also, you need a comma in 13-play, 94-yard drive...
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