Tuesday, March 20, 2012

You don't need to say 'in college'

Found online: The Titans lost their bid to bring Manning back to the state where he played in college for the University of Tennessee.

I know this will sound nitpicking, but do you need "in college" when the University of Tennessee comes soon afterward?

The Titans lost their bid to bring Manning back to the state where he played for the University of Tennessee.

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