McCoy was their seventh-round draft pick this year. He was the first 2010 draft pick to sign with the Dolphins, which isn't quite what this sentence said. I'm nitpicking a bit, but I'm making a point. Anyone who didn't know about the Dolphins' 2010 draft might think that McCoy was their No. 1 draft pick.
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