Monday, April 16, 2012

Not quite right

Headline found online: Local Products Workout for Pack

If they were doing a workout with the Packers, that would be right. But they didn't. I'd change that to this:

Local Athletes Work Out for Pack

You'll notice I changed "products" to "athletes." To me, products are something you can buy in the store.

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