Needs editing: I hate to pick on one story found online, but this one needs editing.
Here's the first paragraph:
Nineteenth-century British prime minister and author Benjamin Disraeli once said "Desperation is sometimes as powerful an inspirer as genius." With the hire of coaching legend and septuagenarian serial employment philanderer Larry Brown, SMU athletic director Steve Orsini went one philosophical level deeper. He's made a move that smacks of both driving forces.
Here's another sentence that bothers me:
It's not about how many games he wins or how long Brown will stay or whom his hand-picked successor will be.
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