Friday, August 19, 2016

Getting the words together

FOUND ONLINE: Andrew Breitbart, a staunchly conservative media entrepreneur, created Breitbart.tv in 2007, which mostly aggregated news from other outlets.

Our writer used "in 2007" to split up Breitbart.tv and which, and they obviously go together. I'd move "in 2007" to the front so we can get Breitbart.tv and which together.

In 2007, Andrew Breitbart, a staunchly conservative media entrepreneur, created Breitbart.tv, which mostly aggregated news from other outlets.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Where possible you can attempt to plan your walks further away from busy roads and motorways, and keep your dog to heel or on the lead near the roadside.

Because this is distance, it should be farther, not further.

Where possible you can attempt to plan your walks farther away from busy roads and motorways, and keep your dog to heel or on the lead near the roadside.

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