Getting the words together

FOUND ONLINE: Andrew Breitbart, a staunchly conservative media entrepreneur, created Breitbart.tv in 2007, which mostly aggregated news from other outlets.

Our writer used "in 2007" to split up Breitbart.tv and which, and they obviously go together. I'd move "in 2007" to the front so we can get Breitbart.tv and which together.

In 2007, Andrew Breitbart, a staunchly conservative media entrepreneur, created Breitbart.tv, which mostly aggregated news from other outlets.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Where possible you can attempt to plan your walks further away from busy roads and motorways, and keep your dog to heel or on the lead near the roadside.

Because this is distance, it should be farther, not further.

Where possible you can attempt to plan your walks farther away from busy roads and motorways, and keep your dog to heel or on the lead near the roadside.

CONTACT: Email me at tgilli52@gmail.com or nc3022@yahoo.com. Also, my Twitter handle is EDITORatWORK.

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• Reminders for would-be novelists

• What I do when I'm editing

• What I charge (it's a deal) and what I edit

• Slogging through the Internet

• J-school: More eyes on your stories

• J-school: Go out and learn

• Rookie mistakes for magazine writers

Entries from The Dog Blog

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• Growl and pull

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• ... said the spider to ...

• The Dog Diary (2014)

• YIP! YIP! The stereo-sound huskies

• What Lady and Michael Jackson had in common

Blog entries from The Auto Racing Journal

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• Then Junior Said to Jeff...

(the book of great NASCAR stories)

• My best day as a sports writer

• Jeff Gordon's milk toast to Dale Earnhardt

• Wayne Auton: A life in racing

More blog entries by Tom Gillispie

• Resume for a writer and editor

• An editor's views on powerful writing

• Advice for be and would-be novelists

• Links to TG's stories online

• Favorite quotes

• What I do when I'm editing

Anecdotes by Tom Gillispie

• Good Samaritan

• The PRESS cap and my friend Mike

• Watching TV

• No luck with Billy Sims

• Wipeout at Death Valley

• Days with rainbows

• A desperate writer working in the dark

• Yer outta there!