Monday, February 26, 2018

Carroll has been a coach

FOUND ONLINE: Carroll has been a coach who placed a high value on loyalty and he has been reluctant to make changes to his staff in the form of firing assistants.


This story is just too wordy. Let's try again:


Carroll has placed a high value on loyalty and has been reluctant to fire his assistants.


ALSO FOUND ONLINE: Truth be told – Landry might never dawn the aqua and teal anymore.


What was the writer thinking? I hope he meant don, not dawn.

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