If you take out unnecessary words, this trims down to After being 14-0, this team has had its postseason... Yes, that ought to be its, not their.
NICE HEAD: I like this headline about the University of Tennessee looking for a new football coach — Any Volunteers? 10 Potential Candidates for the Tennessee Coaching Vacancy. Why do I like it? They're the Tennessee Volunteers, of course.
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