Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Wednesday's first edit

NEEDS EDITING: After being 14-0, the fastest-starting team in the N.F.L. has had their postseason turned into an unintentional referendum on how to finish.

If you take out unnecessary words, this trims down to After being 14-0, this team has had its postseason... Yes, that ought to be its, not their.

NICE HEAD: I like this headline about the University of Tennessee looking for a new football coach — Any Volunteers? 10 Potential Candidates for the Tennessee Coaching Vacancy. Why do I like it? They're the Tennessee Volunteers, of course.

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