They have one more against the Angels on Sunday and then try to ruin the baseball lives of the American League wild-card-leading Boston Red Sox next week at Fenway Park.
"American League wild-card-leading Boston Red Sox" is way too long. This is better:
They play the Angels again on Sunday and then next week at Boston will try to ruin the baseball lives of the Red Sox, leading the wild-card chase in the American League.
It's about the same length, and it gets rid of the huge stack.
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