Thursday, July 14, 2016

Media is demanding

FOUND ONLINE: National and international media is demanding her attention as she's the anti-Trump Republicans' last stand.

The word media is plural for medium, so media are would be correct here.

FROM THE SAME ARTICLE: Unruh, like all Colorado delegates, were supporters of Sen. Ted Cruz during the Republican primary and her opposition to Trump is fueling her effort.

The problem here is that Unruh is directly connected to were supporters. So was a supporter would work. Unruh was a supporter of Cruz; so were the other Colorado delegates. I've also added a comma after primary.

Unruh, like all Colorado delegates, was a supporter of Sen. Ted Cruz during the Republican primary, and her opposition to Trump is fueling her effort.

CONTACT: Email me at tgilli52@gmail.com or nc3022@yahoo.com. Also, my Twitter handle is EDITORatWORK.


Entries from The Dog Blog

Blog entries from The Auto Racing Journal
(a book of great stories about the Intimidator)
(the book of great NASCAR stories)

More blog entries by Tom Gillispie

No comments:

Post a Comment