This makes it sound like Tony Bennett is built around the pack line defense. He's not. His system is built around it.
With a system built around the pack line defense and a patient offense, Tony Bennett needs a certain type of kid to fit his system.
Yes, it's a little longer, but it's accurate. Also, "very" isn't necessary.
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