Most editors won't allow a writer to use a word twice in one sentence UNLESS THERE'S A GOOD REASON. There's no good reason here.
He said he backs Clinton because of her support for allowing people in the United States illegally to stay under certain circumstances. And because of Trump’s rhetoric.
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