Monday, November 30, 2009

A quick edit...

Needs editing: As always, I'm a stickler for putting time and date in the right place. Found online -- Mr. Pinder’s organization estimates that about 1,500 people have been killed while working for news organizations in the last decade.

That would read better if you said "1,500 people have been killed in the last decade while working for news organizations."

More later.

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