Won their 4,000th game

HERE'S THE FIRST PARAGRAPH of a story found on The Associated Press wire Sunday:

Kevin Slowey earned his first win in nearly a month and the Twins won their 4,000th game since the franchise moved to Minnesota, 6-2 over the Cleveland Indians on Sunday.

And here's a better way to do it.

Kevin Slowey earned his first win in nearly a month as the Twins beat the Cleveland Indians on Sunday and posted their 4,000th victory since the franchise moved to Minnesota.

It's still long, but it makes more sense.

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