Saturday, February 20, 2016

Secure the acquisition

FOUND ONLINE: Following the 2008 season, the Miami Dolphins were able to secure the acquisition of a player who would eventually become the face of the franchise.

Why not say that the Dolphins acquired a player? "Secure the acquisition of a player" is word overkill.

ALSO FOUND ONLINE: A roundup and compilation of all the expert's mock drafts in beautiful pie charts.

There's more than one expert, so that should be plural.

A roundup and compilation of all the experts' mock drafts in beautiful pie charts.


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